Sense of humor is important in life because it helps in making new friends.
Meeting new person is often a nervous situation. If you have a sense of humor it will be less nervous. You make every part of this „mysterious ritual” easier. Also people are more likely to chit-chat with you and trust you faster. Of course it is not a rule that everyone with sense of humor is an outgoing extrovert and love meeting new people but if someone is – sense of humor is ones the greatest weapon in making friends.
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You focused on a single benefit of having a sense of humour, which is great.
OdpowiedzUsuńThe sentences in the middle sound a bit short and choppy - you could connect them more.
The final sentence should be split into too because as a whole it doesn't conclude the paragraph but introduces a new idea as well.